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Did you drop Have you ever dropped your phone into the toilet? Well I did once. I also splashed some water on my very expensive palmtop while on a boat holiday. Water is a nasty enemy of all electronics, isn’t it? Well it got me thinking and I came up with an easy and cost-effective solution for that!  Suck’n’Dry is a cheap and easy to apply vacuum-type covering that allows your electronic devices to be used even underwater! It’s very easy to adjust and it works on all the devices protecting those that normally are not waterproof!  

Even the several sailing companies expressed interest for in our product and it’s a sure fire way to bring in big bucks with small production costs! I have created a team of experts that are not afraid to drop their phones into the toilet! They are a hard working lot with plenty of academical and practical background, ready to break their back on at my command!  Hope to get you on board with us esteemed investors!

The pitch is fine as such but seems unfinished, as if you had no time to write it properly. But the style and appealing tone is good.

Mark: 17/20

Anna Wajs